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SentenceOpeners

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* Sentence Openers for Essays and Fiction
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Sentence Openers for Essays and Fiction


Hi, I'm Mary Duffy, Co-author of How to Improve Writing With Sentence
Openers. Thank you for visiting. This book will be an eye opener for
you!
Mary Duffy Download Sentence Openers and you'll see that this e-book is
no 2 or 3 page report, but a solid 72-page book which will change not
only the quality of your writing, but also the quality of your
professional life.
Put into action our techniques and you won't go gack to your old habits
of writing sentences --subject, verb, object-- that bores readers to
tears.
No more S-V-O. No More S-V-O.
If you are in the habit of writing sentences that begin with articles,
nouns, or pronouns, then your prose will sound like:
John hit the ball. Danny the catcher caught the ball. The crowd
roared. Then we evened the score. The game was disappointing and
boring. We went home.

How boring!


What do you usually find in Bookstores to Show You How to Improve
Writing?
Very little! You will find the same old tools:
Old grammar books, exhausted writing guides, unimaginative workshops
paperbacks, and faded style books that offer the
same rehashed examples.
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Now, let me tell you what you'll find in our e-book:
1. An introduction that explains how you are judged by your writing.
2. How verbal sentence openers make your prose athletic.
3. How to use subordinating conjunctions as sentence openers.
4. Using similes to startle your reader.
5. Directing traffic with prepositional phrases.
6. Powerful openers with Absolute phrases.
With copious writing examples --lots of examples of
fine writing-- culled from master writers, our How to Improve
Writing With Sentence Openers will show you the basic steps for you
to crank out appealing, smart, and intense sentence openers that
hook!
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Plato, Maureen Dowd, Sigmund Freud, Betty Friedan and other essayists,
novelists, columnists, short-story writers, journalists, philosophers,
and critics know how fine writing begins: Nail the opener! The rest
follows.
Writing sentences that are powerful will open many doors for you when
you write memos, email, letters, college papers, essays, and fiction.
Learn the writing techniques for sentence openers and sentence
beginnings that will make your writing not only effective, but also
elegant--writing that stands out!
Elevate your writing skills and dazzle friends, colleagues, readers,
agents, and editors with our awesome sentence openers. Here is one
example of how master writer Vladimir Nabokov opens a sentence with an
infinitive:



Grammar and syntax textbooks will NOT show you how to begin your
sentences. Forget about old grammar lessons:

Grammar lessons.

Exercises on writing topic sentences.

Chapter-end drills.

Diagramming sentences.

Memorizing rules (as in The Elements of Style).

How to Improve Writing With Sentence Openers is a practical e-book
filled with many pages of sound practical tips, aid, help, lessons, and
advice to write potent sentence beginnings. How will you learn? By
seeing the patterns, by valuing the writing of master writers, and by
making their legacy your possession.


Search the Internet, or bookstores, or college or universities'
libraries and you won't find the detailed treatment of 'sentence
openers,' 'beginning sentences,' and 'opening sentences' as it is
presented in Mary Duffy's textbook. Get your copy right now!
Your investment in this unique book will give a ROI (return on
investment) that will last a liftetime.
THE PRICE FOR THE HOLIDAYS' SEASON IS ONLY $7.95
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Let's Look at a few examples --cited in our eBook How to Improve
Writing with Sentence Openers-- of how master writers use prepositional
phrases to open their sentences:

After dinner, when we were sitting by the fire, and I was meditating an
escape to Peggotty without having the hardihood to slip away ... a
coach drove up to the garden-gate, and he went out to receive his
visitor (Dickens, Copperfield 47).

During the late summer of 1714 all England awaited the coming of King
George I. On September 18 he landed at Greenwich (Churchill 95).

During the dull day, in the course of which he was entertained by his
elderly hosts and by the more important of the visitors ... (Tolstoy,
War and Peace 369). (In the above example Tolstoy embellishes the use
of his prepositional phrase with alliteration).

To the young lady, this separation was the poignant climax of all her
sufferings. Through the carport, I could see a patchy apron of grass, a
crescent of yard (Grafton, `A' is for Alibi 170).

With any other jury it must have made the impression that he hoped to
make. It may even have made its impression put on these poor,
pusillanimous sheep (Sabatini 29).

This one-syllable--`With'--preposition is a humble preposition, yet it
plays an important role in the English language. Notice how

Charlotte Bronte uses it in her novel Villete:

With her father she really was still a child, or child-like,
affectionate, merry, and playful. With me she was serious, and as
womanly as thought and feeling could make her. With Mrs. Bretton she
was docile and reliant, but not exapansive. With Graham she was shy, at
present very shy; at moments she tried to be cold; on occasion she
endeavoured to shun him (317).

As we have seen, the choice of sentence openers keeps the reader
interested, breaking up the monotony of the S-V-O pattern. By mixing
and commingling the sentence openers we have discussed, your prose will
become athletic, exciting, breathless--never boring.

`Nominative Absolutes' may also be used as sentence openers! Absolutes,
then, become unsurpassed tools to spice up and revive sentences that
otherwise might lay dead on arrival.

Take the following plain sentence:

Louise rushed to the bathroom where she scrubbed her hands throughly.

And compare it to the same sentence, but preceded by a `nominative
absolute' as opener:

Hands trembling, Louise rushed to the bathroom where she scrubbed her
hands thoroughly.

Here's another example:

Eyes narrowed, fists clenched, lips trembling, he waited in the dark.

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If you alread know quite a bit of English and write well, but your
speech is slow and tentative--We have just what you need:
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* News
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M. Guerrero Co-author
14-08-2009
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Alecsandra K.
10-06-2009

Without a doubt, Mary Duffy's Sentence openers has changed my
life! All my coworkers tell me my writing is not only
forceful, but also elegant. This humble ebook will unlock
anyone's potential to write well. Give it a try.

Novel Writing Techniques Made Easy!
April 17, 2009
Rebecca-
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Hemingway-
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For my Psych class I wrote an essay on the bestseller Blink.
To my great delight, my teacher said it was the best essay he
had read this year. One of his comments was: "How you begin
your sentences makes your writing outstanding!" -
Getting high grades is fine, but learning writing skills for
life is even better. Mary Duffy's Sentence Openers e-book has
changed my life! I came from China one year ago, and now I
feel Mary's book has leveled the playing field--I can compete
and hold my own with the best students.
In our Writing Center we learned about the structure of essays
(theme, development, conclusion), but no one bothered to tell
us how to open sentences. After reading Mary Duffy's e-book I
now realize what had been missing from my writing. (K. Cheng).

Writing is Fun!
16-04-2009
Write your own bestsellers! Become a professional writer.
And write many articles, stories, plays, and novels.


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I got an A on My term paper on Freud, DaVinci, and Pacioli.
My professor praised my writing; he wrote on the
margin: "Terrific essay!" Irma Daunoraite).
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"Like an architect designing a palace, he planned
the life he was going to lead."
"Shamefaced, beaten, crushed, he went back to the station and
returned to Paris." Flaubert, Sentimental Education.
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